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NIGHT SHIFT NOTES
THE DARK BENEATH: He Made Them Watch
I found him just past the treeline behind the motel, placed carefully where the gravel meets the brush. He wasn’t dumped. He was arranged. His shirt had been opened with surgical precision, his body positioned as if for instruction. There were no signs of struggle. No torn earth. Just two small punctures at the base of his neck and eyes that never got the chance to close. Whoever did this wanted him awake. And wanted us to see it.
Loretta & David Allseitz
Feb 25
LESSON #17 — Most Advice Is Self-Protection
Advice sounds generous. Calm. Mature. But most advice isn’t neutral — it reinforces the person giving it. It protects their worldview, their comfort, and the choices they’ve already made. This lesson breaks down how guidance often preserves stability instead of truth, why autonomy triggers pushback, and how to spot when “help” is really maintenance. Not all advice is bad. But none of it is unbiased.
Loretta & David Allseitz
Feb 19
OBSERVATIONS: I Didn’t Mean to Build a Motel
I didn’t mean to build a motel. I meant to write stories in the passenger seat of an 18-wheeler at 2am while the highway hummed under everything. But the sign showed up. The hallway followed. Then the rooms. The more honest I got, the more solid it became. It stopped feeling like branding and started feeling like discovery. I didn’t design it. I noticed it. And once I stopped sanding the edges down, it built itself.
Loretta & David Allseitz
Feb 16
🚧 MANAGEMENT NOTICE: RENOVATIONS IN PROGRESS
Renovations are underway. Not the cheerful kind. A few rooms needed attention, a few doors stopped cooperating, and some things refused to stay where they were put. You’ll notice new keys, taped-off areas, and spaces that weren’t here yesterday but insist they’ve always been. Walk carefully. Don’t move anything that looks placed on purpose. If a door is sealed, it’s sealed for a reason. Management is handling it. Enjoy your stay and try not to wander into the wrong room.
Loretta & David Allseitz
Feb 13
THE DARK BENEATH: SPECIAL UPDATE - (Case File #24) Rae Childress
December at Terrell isn’t quiet. It’s controlled. Three months after Rae was committed, another girl is found in a utility closet—bruised, gasping, plastic embedded in her cheek. No accident. No mistake. Everyone knows who could’ve done it. The problem isn’t suspicion. It’s proof. And in a locked ward full of cameras and charts, proof is the one thing that keeps slipping through the cracks.
Loretta & David Allseitz
Feb 12
ROOM REQUEST DENIED
ROOM 13 - END UNIT We stopped assigning this room. Vacant doesn't mean empty. Incident Log (updated nightly) Management is aware. That’s all we can confirm. 2:14 AM Light visible under the door. Power disconnected. 1:52 AM Phone rang inside. Line unplugged. 1:11 AM Knock reported from within. No guest assigned. 12:47 AM Door handle turning. Deadbolt engaged. 12:03 AM Shadow visible beneath the door. Hallway empty. 11:02 PM Television audible. Set removed last week. 10:26 PM W
Loretta & David Allseitz
Feb 12
LESSON #16 — HERO vs VILLAIN: The Cost of Being the One Who Tries
Trying feels responsible. Reliable. Mature.
Until it quietly becomes your job to keep everything from falling apart.
This lesson breaks down how effort turns into expectation, why the person who stops gets blamed, and how “being the one who tries” traps people in roles they never agreed to. It’s not about good or bad behavior. It’s about what happens when a system only works because you’re holding it together — and what it costs you to keep doing it.
Loretta & David Allseitz
Feb 9
MANAGEMENT NOTICE: Motel Gift Shop + Art Exhibit Now Open
Management Notice: The Motel Gift Shop is now open. Souvenirs are available at the counter—but the real opening is the Art Exhibit. The lobby always warns first: copper in the air, cameras skipping time, wall hangings that don’t feel like decoration anymore. After police release the rooms back to management, we’re ordered to destroy contaminated wall pieces. We didn’t. We kept them. Now they’re on display.
Loretta & David Allseitz
Feb 5
OBSERVATIONS: People Think They Know Me — I Let Them
People have always decided who I am faster than they should. I expected that to fade with age. It didn’t. Adults just do it with more confidence. They assign motive based on appearance, draw conclusions without evidence, and warn each other about a version of me they invented. I used to correct it. Now I don’t. Letting assumptions stand tells me more than defending myself ever did.
Loretta & David Allseitz
Feb 3
THE DARK BENEATH: No Checkout (Case File #23)
The Dark Beneath — Unmasking Evil
Vacancy doesn’t mean empty.
It means someone left without taking everything with them.
In the world of The Dark Beneath, this roadside motel doesn’t trap people or chase them. It doesn’t need to. The beds remember weight, pressure, the moment a body realizes it isn’t leaving the way it arrived.
Checkout is offered.
Completion is not.
Loretta & David Allseitz
Jan 30
LESSON #15 — The Dark Side of “Good Intentions”: Why Meaning Well Still Wrecks Things
People love hiding behind “good intentions” when their behavior causes damage. But intent doesn’t erase impact — and meaning well doesn’t make a pattern harmless. This lesson breaks down why “I didn’t mean it like that” is the most popular alibi, how sincerity keeps accountability delayed, and why adults are responsible for outcomes, not just motives. If someone keeps hurting you politely, the problem isn’t misunderstanding. It’s permission.
Loretta & David Allseitz
Jan 27
OBSERVATIONS: Why I Trust Patterns More Than Stories
Stories are easy to tell. They adapt, soften, and explain just enough to sound believable. Patterns don’t do that. They repeat quietly, without concern for how they’re received. Over time, they reveal what stories try to smooth over — the habits, behaviors, and consistencies that don’t change no matter how the explanation does. When I write crime, it’s those repetitions I trust most. Not because they’re dramatic, but because they persist.
Loretta & David Allseitz
Jan 23
THE DARK BENEATH: The Autopsy Photo That Showed the Killer (Case File #22)
The autopsy was routine until someone noticed the reflection. Not a staff member. Not equipment. A man’s face, faintly visible in the stainless steel beside the body. At first it was dismissed as distortion—until the same face appeared in another case, and another, each tied to brutal, rage-filled murders where the killer was never found. The bodies stopped moving. The photos didn’t. And whoever was responsible never seemed to leave the room.
Loretta & David Allseitz
Jan 20
LESSON #14 — Charm Is a Performance, Consistency Is the Tell
Charm wins early. Consistency tells the truth. Anyone can show up strong once, say the right things, and create intensity that feels meaningful. But performances fade. Patterns don’t. This lesson breaks down why charm is easy, why consistency is rare, and how to stop mistaking effort spikes for commitment. Because confusion isn’t chemistry — it’s information you’ve been ignoring.
Loretta & David Allseitz
Jan 16
OBSERVATIONS: The Moments That Don’t Make It Into the Case File
Case files are built on what can be recorded — dates, times, locations, statements that hold their shape. But real moments don’t always cooperate. There’s a space between what gets written down and what actually happens in a room. Pauses. Avoided answers. Shifts in tone after the recorder stops. Those moments aren’t evidence. They don’t belong in reports. And yet, they’re often the ones that stay with you long after a case is considered closed.
Loretta & David Allseitz
Jan 13
THE DARK BENEATH: The Obituary That Came Early (Case File #21)
In a small East Texas town, the obituary page was never about surprises—it was about confirmation. That’s why people noticed when a familiar name appeared too early, written with the kind of detail only someone who knew the ending could manage. The paper called it an error. Then it happened again. And again. Soon, the page stopped announcing deaths and started scheduling them.
Loretta & David Allseitz
Jan 6
Find & Color the Suspect: Upload Your Pages Below
Join the Find & Color the Suspect Challenge from Teardrops of Lake Tawakoni: The Coloring Book! Hidden suspects appear on select pages—spot them, color them, and upload your finished artwork in the comments. The first 10 readers to find and share all hidden suspects will win a free audiobook and have their pages featured on the author’s website. Dive into suspense, secrets, and eerie East Texas landscapes in this interactive coloring experience.
Loretta & David Allseitz
Jan 5
LESSON #13 — The Dark Side of Fresh Starts: Nothing Resets Just Because the Calendar Changed
Every January, people act like the calendar hit a reset button. New year. New you. Clean slate. That’s cute — and wildly untrue. Time doesn’t erase patterns. Champagne doesn’t fix habits. And January doesn’t magically change decisions you’ve been avoiding for years. Fresh starts feel productive because they require hope, not action. But real change doesn’t come from a new year — it comes from new decisions. This lesson breaks down why “fresh starts” fail and what actually cre
Loretta & David Allseitz
Jan 1
OBSERVATIONS: Why Small Towns Make the Best Crime Stories
Small towns thrive on familiarity—routine, reputation, and silence. When nothing looks wrong, no one wants to ask hard questions. In places like East Texas, crime doesn’t announce itself; it hides in habits and unspoken agreements. This essay explores why familiarity can be more dangerous than anonymity, and why the quiet places we trust most often carry the heaviest secrets.
Loretta & David Allseitz
Dec 31, 2025
THE DARK BENEATH: The Job Application That Asked the Wrong Questions (Case File #20)
The job posting didn’t look strange at first. Regional hauls. Night shifts. Weekly pay. But the application asked questions no employer should care about—who would notice if you didn’t come home, how long before someone looked for you, whether anyone depended on you. People answered anyway. Because rent was due. Because work was work. And because no one realized the job wasn’t hiring drivers. It was selecting disappearances.
Loretta & David Allseitz
Dec 30, 2025
LESSON #12 — Dark-Side First Date Questions
Most first dates ask safe questions. The dark side asks useful ones. These aren’t icebreakers — they’re pattern detectors. Ten smartass, brutally honest questions designed to reveal how someone handles conflict, expectations, pressure, and accountability before you waste months figuring it out the hard way. If a question makes someone uncomfortable, defensive, or evasive, congratulations — it just did its job. Printable included.
Loretta & David Allseitz
Dec 29, 2025
LESSON #11 — Confidence Changes the Way People Lie to You
Christmas isn’t magic — it’s camouflage. When everyone’s expected to be nicer, more forgiving, and “keep the peace,” bad behavior gets a holiday pass. Lesson 11 breaks down why confidence makes people lie worse during the holidays, how Christmas cheer becomes cover for half-truths, and why asking the right questions exposes stories faster than confrontation ever could. This isn’t about ruining Christmas. It’s about not helping lies survive it.
Loretta & David Allseitz
Dec 24, 2025
THE DARK BENEATH: The Last Person to Leave the Party (Case File #19)
By the time the fire burned down to embers, everyone had already decided to leave. Trucks pulled out one by one, music died, and the woods settled back into themselves. By morning, only one pickup remained near the tree line—keys still inside, tailgate down, fire long cold. No signs of a fight. No tracks leading away. Just the quiet understanding that someone stayed too long… and didn’t leave with the rest.
Loretta & David Allseitz
Dec 23, 2025
LESSON #10 — You’re Not Afraid of Failure. You’re Afraid of Being Seen Trying
You’re not afraid of failing — you’re afraid of being seen trying. This lesson breaks down why visibility feels more dangerous than mistakes, how hiding masquerades as “being careful,” and why confidence never shows up before action. If you’ve been rehearsing in private, waiting to feel ready, or mistaking invisibility for safety, this is your wake-up call. The dark side isn’t about hiding — it’s about moving anyway.
Loretta & David Allseitz
Dec 22, 2025
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