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THE DARK BENEATH: The Obituary That Came Early (Case File #21)

  • Writer: Loretta & David Allseitz
    Loretta & David Allseitz
  • Jan 6
  • 4 min read

Updated: Jan 20


Newspaper with "Obituaries" headline on a wooden table, next to a coffee cup and glasses, evokes a somber and reflective mood.

The Dark Beneath is fiction—lore, not evidence. If you take it as fact, that’s between you, your lying uncle, and whatever’s creeping around your woods at 2 a.m.



CASE FILE #21


If you grow up in East Texas, you don’t read the obituary page because you’re morbid.

You read it because it tells you how careful you’re supposed to be that week.


It tells you whose name not to say too loudly at the gas station, which family is about to receive casseroles they won’t eat, and which stretches of conversation need to end with a pause instead of a joke. The obituary page isn’t gossip. It’s orientation. It’s the town quietly agreeing on what has already happened.


That’s why the first obituary didn’t feel frightening.

It felt misplaced. Like a chair sitting a few inches too close to the table.



The Name That Arrived Too Early

The notice appeared on a weekday morning, printed in the same typeface the paper had used for decades, positioned exactly where it belonged. Nothing about it stood out until someone recognized the name and felt that small internal hitch—the kind you get when you see a familiar truck in a ditch and realize it shouldn’t be there.


The man was alive.


Not barely. Not technically. Alive enough to be at work, to answer his phone, to shrug when someone showed him the clipping and said, half-laughing, “You want to explain this?” 


The obituary was clean and thorough, written with the kind of quiet respect reserved for people whose lives fit neatly into a paragraph. Birthdate correct. Family listed accurately. Even the line about his hobbies sounded right, like it had been written by someone who’d watched him long enough to know which details mattered.


The paper pulled it within the hour and blamed a formatting error. A clerical issue. An automated system misfiring.


Everyone accepted that explanation because it was easier than examining the alternative, which was that the paper hadn’t guessed.


It had remembered something early.


When the Mistake Repeated Itself

The second obituary didn’t spread as fast, not because people missed it, but because they hesitated. The name belonged to someone quieter, someone who didn’t occupy much space in town conversations. The notice sat there longer, uncorrected, as if waiting to be acknowledged.


The details were what made people uneasy.


A childhood accident never mentioned outside the family. A nickname no one used in public. Pallbearers listed who hadn’t spoken to each other in years, all spelled correctly, all placed in an order that made sense only if someone understood the history between them.


The person was alive.


Someone finally noticed the date.


The obituary didn’t say today.


It said next Tuesday.


The First One to Catch Up

When the first man died, no one used the word “prediction,” but no one argued against it either. The cause of death matched the notice with a precision that made people reread sentences they’d already memorized, searching for something they could claim had been vague. It wasn’t. The phrasing matched. The location matched. Even the way the obituary described how he was found felt less like a summary and more like rehearsal.


When the paper reran the obituary—unchanged—people stopped pretending this was coincidence and started treating the page like a ledger.


Not of deaths.


Of approvals.


The Page Changed Its Tone

After that, the obituaries grew sharper, as if whoever—or whatever—was writing them had stopped bothering with softness. Times narrowed. Locations became exact. Causes of death shifted from euphemism to anatomy. One notice listed survivors in the present tense, as though they hadn’t quite joined the aftermath yet.


Another obituary included the line “preceded in death by” followed by a name that was still walking around town.


That was the moment people stopped calling the editor and started calling attorneys, only to discover that the paper couldn’t tell them who had written the notices because no one had. The system auto-generated drafts, they said. Pulled data from public records, archives, templates.


No human hands involved.


That explanation should have been comforting.

It wasn’t.


Leaving Didn’t Change the Ending

One woman packed her car the night her name appeared and drove until the roads flattened and the accents shifted, convinced that distance would disrupt whatever mechanism had made the mistake. She didn’t tell anyone where she was going.


Her obituary updated before sunrise.


New location.

Same language.

Same ending.


It didn’t feel like a threat.

It felt like a correction.


The One Without a Date

The obituary that finally broke whatever resistance people had left didn’t include a death date at all. Just a name printed alone, followed by a blank space where details should have been.


At the bottom, a single line sat in bold, as if copied from a form that hadn’t been fully submitted:

Services pending.


The person read it themselves, standing in their kitchen with the paper folded wrong, fingers leaving creases in places they didn’t remember touching.


They didn’t make it to the weekend.



⚠️ FINAL WORD

Some towns don’t predict death.


They document it early, file it neatly, and wait for the body to comply.


And once your name appears in print,

it isn’t a warning.


It’s a schedule.



Alright, Villains—what’s your theory?

The dark doesn’t explain itself. And Neither do I.



If CASE FILE #21 is the first you're reading, make sure to go back and check out "The Dark Beneath" series of posts! The Dark Beneath: Scary Folklore & Whispers in Texas




-Unmasking Evil

Villains Welcome.


*If you’re drawn to dark truths and the stories they leave behind, start with The Dollmaker of Point on Amazon.


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